Thursday, April 14, 2011

The New Life

It’s a story about a girl who feels bored with her life. One day, she wakes up in the morning and takes a short shower as usual. She thinks that today is going to be the same as others. She makes a toast for breakfast while waiting for her hair to dry. She puts gray shirts and black jeans on and leaves for school. Waiting for the lights to be turned to green, she just stares somewhere between the buildings which tower like castles that are not easy to approach. She thinks it is changed to green, but she might not care about the color. Just when she thinks it is green, the thing happens, abruptly and unexpectedly. She only could feel crashed into something horribly cold and stiff before falling down on the ground.


She could see something approaching her. She does not know exactly what it is, but it makes her shudder. As time goes by, it looks bigger than before, but it still looks blurred. After quite a long time, of course she does not know how long it has been, a voice shakes her out of her sleep. She wants to say anything about something, but she could not say any single word. She realizes anything did not come out of her mouth, though she thinks she told something. Rather, she could not even move her mouth! After stood up, she could see herself still lying on the street, like a body. It was the weirdest scene that she has ever seen in her whole life. She was dead. It was the only possible explanation she could find about this situation. She does not know what she should do, so she goes back her home.


At home, she tries to find evidences for her life. However, all she could find is just how boring her life was. She realizes how terribly she lived. Even though there is nothing she can recall, she wants to live again. If there was one more opportunity, she would live differently from the past. Thinking about this, she falls asleep on her bed. After few hours later, she wakes up and opens her eyes. She could see she is in hospital gown. Just then, a nurse comes to her and says that she has had a car accident and was carried into the hospital. Suddenly, she could feel her eyes are filled with tears, and she makes her mind that she would live, not like the past. By this time, she realizes the real value of living, and the story ends.


3 comments:

  1. i like your handwriting ^^.
    also i like your story.
    it is just like real story.^^
    i think this is your story in Olemiss.

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  2. I think the girl's life is similar to my life!:p And also this story is about almost of teen girl's story! Moreover your writing is always well-organized!!

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  3. Your story gives me some teaching that life is valuable. After I read your story, I thought that I'm gonna fill my life with precious memory and experiences. How happy she's alive at the end of your story!!

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